Maham Azmi
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« on: January 22, 2008, 04:21:42 pm » |
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Adaab arz hei ,
Gumaan hei bewajhe hee hamae ke hum likh sakte hein
so is gumaan ko ap tak pohancha rahe hein
Eik adnaa see kavish hamaree
apkee basaraton kee nazr
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan
hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan
qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei
lamha lamha sata rahee hie
dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei
dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee
jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei.................
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ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka
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« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2008, 06:17:38 am » |
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Maham jii
urdu anjuman meN khush amdeed
aap ka gumaan haqeeqat par mabni hai
likhti rahiye
aur khush rahiye
wasalam
zarqa
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« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2008, 05:56:57 am » |
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Navazish mohtarama ,
bhala laga jaan kar ke ye gumaan apko haqeeqat pe mabni nazar aya
Thanx hazaroun Gulistaan ,
Due Respects
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ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka
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« Reply #3 on: January 24, 2008, 06:55:19 am » |
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Adaab arz hei ,
Gumaan hei bewajhe hee hamae ke hum likh sakte hein
so is gumaan ko ap tak pohancha rahe hein
Eik adnaa see kavish hamaree
apkee basaraton kee nazr
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan
hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan
qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei
lamha lamha sata rahee hie
dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei
dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee
jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei.................
bahoot khob maham jee aap ki yeh kaavish behad pasand aayii,aur kuchh pasandaa ayaa ho to aap ki urduman men haajrii,aap ko yaha dekh kar bahoot khushii huii,aur yakeen maaniye yun tasalli huii ki koii apna khoyaa hua dost waapis mil gaya ho. yunhee aate rahiyega aap ke agle kalaam ka intzaar karte hue khudaa-haafis apna khayal rakhe regards manu |
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« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2008, 02:10:12 pm » |
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mohtarama maaham saahiba:
bahut dinon ba'ad aap se mukhaatib hone ka ittefaaq huwaa,ummid ke aap aur ki family sehat aur massarat men honge.
aap ki yeh khoobsoorat nezm ,ghumaan ho rahaa hai,ki pehle bhii parhii hai
aur bahut khoobsoorat alfaaz men dil ki kaifiiaat ko bayaan karti hai.
aur yakiinan aap ka likhne ke baare men ghumaan,bewajah hargiz nahiin hai.
meri aor se is khoobsoorat kalaam pe daad qabool farmaayen
mukhlis
zaamin
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« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2008, 03:04:57 pm » |
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adaab arz hei hazrat ,
umeed hie mizaaj bakher hon ge
baad mudat apse mil kar bhala laga dilko
apki daad aaj bhi bauhat qeemte maham ke liye
Thanx hazaroun gulistan , sir
Due Respects !
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ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
_____________________________________
eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka
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« Reply #7 on: January 28, 2008, 04:01:43 pm » |
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Adaab arz hei ,
Gumaan hei bewajhe hee hamae ke hum likh sakte hein
so is gumaan ko ap tak pohancha rahe hein
Eik adnaa see kavish hamaree
apkee basaraton kee nazr
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan
hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan
qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei
lamha lamha sata rahee hie
dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei
dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee
jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei.................
Maaham jee, aadaab arz hai ! kyaa kehney janaab ! aap ka Khayaal aaj bhii utnaa hii dilkash hai ! vuhii shiddat-e-jazbah ! vuhii falsafa-e-Gham ! vuhi jaado bharaa andaaz ! aap ke Khayaalaat seedhe dil meiN utar jaate haiN ! qaarii ko apnii seHr meiN mukammal taur par jhakaR letii haiN aap kii taHreereN ! Zindagii kii baat bhii aap ne Khoob kahii ! apne do taazah tareen ash'aar yaad aaye ! aek Ghazal meiN jald hii post karne vaalaa hooN ! fil-Haal aap ki nazr do ash'aar !
zindagii aur kuchh naheeN pyaare !
maut ka ik HaseeN bahaanaa hai !
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zindagii aek vahm hai shaayad
aaj kal varna kon jeetaa hai !
dosre miSra ko aap yuuN bhii keh saktii haiN k
zindagii aek vahm hai shaayad !
aaj kal varna kon ZINDAH hai ?
aap ka maddaaH !
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« Reply #8 on: February 08, 2008, 05:00:22 pm » |
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aapi,
aap ki teHreer aajtak waisii hi hay. paRH~ ker bataa sakta hooN keh kisnay likh~ii hay. aur mujh~ay laga keh meN Yeh paRh~ chuka hooN. nah-jaanay kYuuN!
aik uMdah magar dil gudaaz kernay waala andaaz.
waQaar 
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« Reply #9 on: January 03, 2010, 01:24:45 am » |
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Adaab arz hei ,
Gumaan hei bewajhe hee hamae ke hum likh sakte hein
so is gumaan ko ap tak pohancha rahe hein
Eik adnaa see kavish hamaree
apkee basaraton kee nazr
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan
hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan
qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei
lamha lamha sata rahee hie
dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei
dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee
jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei.................
Maaham jee, aadaab arz hai ! kyaa kehney janaab ! aap ka Khayaal aaj bhii utnaa hii dilkash hai ! vuhii shiddat-e-jazbah ! vuhii falsafa-e-Gham ! vuhi jaado bharaa andaaz ! aap ke Khayaalaat seedhe dil meiN utar jaate haiN ! qaarii ko apnii seHr meiN mukammal taur par jhakaR letii haiN aap kii taHreereN ! Zindagii kii baat bhii aap ne Khoob kahii ! apne do taazah tareen ash'aar yaad aaye ! aek Ghazal meiN jald hii post karne vaalaa hooN ! fil-Haal aap ki nazr do ash'aar !
zindagii aur kuchh naheeN pyaare !
maut ka ik HaseeN bahaanaa hai !
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zindagii aek vahm hai shaayad
aaj kal varna kon jeetaa hai !
dosre miSra ko aap yuuN bhii keh saktii haiN k
zindagii aek vahm hai shaayad !
aaj kal varna kon ZINDAH hai ?
aap ka maddaaH !
Zia Balochzia , apko sada hee apni adnaa kavishon pe bedaregh daad dete dekha , ye mehaz apki faraghdilli hei warna maham apni aur in tehreeron ki wuqat se khub waaqif hei.... sach tou ye hei ke zindagi bas yehee hei aur kuch nahi .......... bauhat shukriya zia sahab... |
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ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka
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« Reply #10 on: January 03, 2010, 11:22:55 am » |
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Maham jee, aadaab.
aap kee yeh taKHleeq bhee aaj nazar se guzree. itne saare aHbaab is baat par musir haiN keh aap achhaa likhtee haiN, to yaqeenan ko`ee baat zaroor hai aap kee teHreeroN meiN...
mujhe aap kee teHreeroN meiN besaaKHtagee, eHsaasaat kee shiddat, jazboN kee sachchaa`ee aur aisee hee deegar KHoobiyaaN saaf nazar aatee haiN. is taKHleeq par meree naacheez daad qubool keejiye.
ek baat, jis kee taraf thoRee see tavajjuh darkaar hai, voh nazm kee naGHmagee hai. agar aap apnee nazm meiN ravaanee aur naGHmagee le aa`eiN to aap kee nazmeiN bilaashubah har dil meiN utar jaane kee salaaHiyyat rakhtee haiN. aisaa meraa KHayaal hai so aap kaa is se muttafiq honaa hargiz zarooree naheeN hai.
ek baar phir KHoobsoorat nazm par daad qubool keejiye.
muKHlis
Aamir Abbas
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« Reply #11 on: January 10, 2010, 02:56:31 pm » |
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Aamir sahab,
kya kahe maham is karamfarmayee pur ........
zarahe ko aaftaab banana koi aap se aap jaise aalazarf afraad se seekhe ke jo in murda lafzon mein hauslaafzayee ki ruh phunk dete hein aur ye bejaan tehreerain maham ki sans lene lagtee hein ........
Hum apni aur in tehreeron ki wuqat se khub waqif hein hazrat..........aap ne jo islaah ki vo beshak sach hei.............khuda kare ke kabhi aisa kuch likh sakae maham jo is mehfil ke aur ap se sukhanshanason ke shayaan e shaan ho,
khush rahayae ....
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ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka
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« Reply #12 on: February 08, 2010, 03:59:38 am » |
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Adaab arz hei ,
Gumaan hei bewajhe hee hamae ke hum likh sakte hein
so is gumaan ko ap tak pohancha rahe hein
Eik adnaa see kavish hamaree
apkee basaraton kee nazr
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan
hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan
qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei
lamha lamha sata rahee hie
dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei
dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee
jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei.................
Mashallah Maham ji agar yeh aap ka guman hai too phir haqeeqat kia hoo gi. Zabrdst likha hai. |
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« Reply #13 on: March 04, 2010, 01:09:39 pm » |
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Aik achi kaawish aor gumaan per dheeron daad,
likhti raha karain.........
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« Reply #14 on: May 16, 2010, 10:36:27 pm » |
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Adaab arz hei ,
Gumaan hei bewajhe hee hamae ke hum likh sakte hein
so is gumaan ko ap tak pohancha rahe hein
Eik adnaa see kavish hamaree
apkee basaraton kee nazr
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan
hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan
qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei
lamha lamha sata rahee hie
dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei
dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee
jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei.................
Mashallah Maham ji agar yeh aap ka guman hai too phir haqeeqat kia hoo gi. Zabrdst likha hai.mehaz apka husn e nazar hazur ke ap ne is ko daad se navaaza.... |
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ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka
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