Hadia-e-Naat ba Hazoor Sarwar-e-KaunaiN SAW

[زرقا مفتی]

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[سرور عالم راز]

Zarqa: salaam!

Hamayat Ali "Shair" kee yeh na't aaj pehlee baar paRhee aur muta,accir huwaa. ek to yeh riwaayatee na'toN se muKhtalif hai. phir unhoN ne dard-mandee se qaum kee jo shikaayat kee hai woh dil par acar kartee hai. dar-aSl jo jo baateN unhoN ne apne baare meN likhee haiN woh sab beshtar musalmaanoN par Saadiq aatee haiN. aisee na't ko maiN achhee na't kehtaa hooN. yooN riwaayatee bhee Theek hai!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

[ضیاء بلوچ]

Zarqaa behna, aadaab !

Himaayat Ali Shaai'r SaaHib ki yeh na't mujhe be-Had pasand aa'ii ! is kaa raNg jaisaa k Sarwar SaaHib ne faraamayaa munfarid hai ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN ! k aap ne ise yahaaN paish kiyaa ! shukriya

Zia Baloch

[سالم باشوار]

Mohtarama Zarqa Sahiba,
salaam:
Meri bhi daad aur mubarakbaad iss umda na'at sharakat karne par qubool kijiye.
Shukria

[alvi_zeeshan]

Subhaan Allah!
kya khoobsoorat kalam hai.
Wah Wa, kya hi baat hai.
Bohat hi acha aur mufarid intekhab Zarqa ji, jis ki daad na dena be-shak naa-munasib o ga
bohat si daad yeh kalam ata karney per
Khuda mozaz shayer per apni rehmatoN ka nazool farmaye!

Zeeshan Alvi

[Jawaid Badauni]

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Bahan Zarqa SaaHibah
Tasleemaat

Maanta hooN Himayat Ali Shayar SaHab ki Nazm unki kohna mashqee ki aaeenadaar hai. Yeh bhi tasleem karta hooN keh unki n'aat meN (Agar isey n'aat kahna hi hai) inkesaari hai, jazaba.e istaKhfaar hai, apni kamZoriyoN per nadaamat ka jazba, yeh sub kuch hai aur yeh saree AlaamateN qaabile sataaish haiN. MauSoof ne is qadar dushwar qawafee istaimal kiye haiN jahaN tak mujh jaise mubtadee ki shayad rasaai bhi mumkin nahiN. In qawafee ka istaimal unki kohna mashqee ki daleel hai.

MAGAR, mujhe phir bhi kuch tishnagee see rah gaii. Aap sochtee hoNgee aisa kyuuN huuwa. To Arz kar dooN keh Surat.e Rasool.e Pak per ziyadah sher kahne ka tou maiN bhi qaaiil nahiN hooN magar n'aat ka haq kyuuNker Adaa ho agar seerat.e Rasool SAAW ka bhi koii zikr nah ho. Jin per sher kahe gaye haiN unse muwaddat ki kuch tou mahak sheroN meN hona chaahiye. Main is Azeem shahkaar ko baKhusee ek nihayat kaamyaab wa murassah nazm tou tasleem karooNga shayad n'aat nahiN.

Aap ka mere Khayaalaat se muttafiq hona laazim nahiN. Har forum meN har member ko apne andaaz se sochne ka Haq HaaSil hai.

Khair andesh
Jawaid Badauni